Accuplacer Practice Test

What would be the best way to rephrase the sentence "Good money managers control their present expenses, and they invest surplus dollars to meet their future needs." using the word "BECAUSE"?

1. Good money managers, because they control their present expenses, they invest surplus dollars to meet their future needs.

2. Because good money managers control their present expenses, they invest surplus dollars to meet their needs.

3. Because good money managers control their present expenses they invest surplus dollars to meet their needs.

4. Good money managers control their present expenses, because they invest surplus dollars to meet their future needs.

The correct answer is: Because good money managers control their present expenses, they invest surplus dollars to meet their needs.

The selected answer effectively uses the word "because" to establish a clear cause-and-effect relationship. By beginning the sentence with "Because good money managers control their present expenses," it sets up the rationale for the subsequent action: investing surplus dollars. This structure makes the reasoning behind their investment strategy explicit, emphasizing that their control over current expenses is a foundational practice that enables them to prepare for future financial needs. Additionally, the choice maintains clarity and coherence, ensuring that the sentence flows well and conveys the intended meaning without introducing unnecessary complexity or confusion. The presence of a comma after the dependent clause adds to the readability, making it easier for the reader to understand the connection between the two parts of the sentence.