Accuplacer Practice Test

What would be the appropriate revision for "Tornadoes are winds which rotate in a counterclockwise direction and look like a funnel at the bottom of a cloud, as anyone who is familiar with Oklahoma weather knows." starting with "Anyone who is..."?

1. knowing tornadoes

2. and knows tornadoes

3. has knowledge of tornadoes

4. knows that tornadoes...

The correct answer is: knows that tornadoes...

Starting the revision with "Anyone who is..." and finishing with "knows that tornadoes..." effectively emphasizes the knowledge of individuals familiar with tornadoes, particularly in relation to the context of Oklahoma weather. This phrasing directly connects the awareness of tornadoes to the general public, suggesting a broader understanding of this weather phenomenon. It clarifies that the recognition of tornadoes is not just limited to a certain group but is common among those acquainted with the weather patterns in Oklahoma, maintaining a conversational tone. Additionally, the phrase "knows that tornadoes..." succinctly conveys the important information without unnecessary complexity, ensuring clarity and directness in the statement. This helps maintain the original meaning while providing a smooth transition that ties back to the experience of living in an area prone to tornadoes.